Review : Luckless by Cari Z.

Luckless by Cari Z. is a very different take on dragons than we normally see. In this dystopian novella dragons and their riders must defend the wall-off remnants of cities that regularly get attacked by strange creatures.

Denver is no longer a vibrant city, but one full of rubble and ruin surrounded by forest and things that scream in the night. The only thing keeping it from being overrun are its armed defenders and the few dragons who have bonded with humans. It is a precarious balance and the humans are barely hanging on.

Evan Luck, or Luckless as he is called, is one of the best fighters protecting the city, but he is hated and treated with contempt because his dragon died in battle and he didn't die alongside her. As a lower citizen, he is barely able to get enough food to eat or clothes to wear, though he spends all his time blacksmithing and fighting in battles. He isn't completely tossed out of the city though as he is one of the few people with the mental ability to bond with dragons. But Evan's grief over his dragon's death walls off his emphatic ability and prevents him bonding with another dragon.

Then a new citizen shows up. In a world without easy travel between distant city remnants, a new citizen is a strange and unusual sight. Lee Caldwell is tall and lean, mysterious an odd. He is also looking for someone to guide and nurture his son.

Jason Caldwell is an empath and will be expected to bond with a dragon when he's old enough, and Lee doesn't want him going into things unprepared. In Denver people don't usually start training to be a dragon rider and fighter until they have a dragon, but it leaves them vulnerable since they don't have enough time to train before being tossed out to fight. Lee doesn't want that for his son.

Lee wants Evan to be train his son and prepare him. He's been observing the city and notices that Evan is a good fighter and knows what he's doing, no matter how reviled he is by the population. Evan argues that he couldn't even protect his dragon, but Lee is confident in his choice and soon Evan is taking Jason under his wing.

The trio spend a lot of time together, eventually leading to Evan starting to fall for Lee. But strange dreams and the grieving over his dragon make it difficult for Evan to go further. When a deadly creature threatens Denver's very roots, Evan must decide if he is willing to go on a suicide mission to protect the family he's come to love.

This is a very action-packed story. Skirmishes with creatures and bullies alike fill the pages, with just enough room left for sweet, tender moments. The danger and drama level is pretty high, but the grieving angst is also there as well. Warning, there is no overt suicide talk, but it is definitely a hidden threat as Evan is very borderline in his grief. It is definitely a possible trigger for some people.

All three of the main characters are interesting, and while the secret Lee is keeping is fairly obvious eventually, it is still a neat surprise. Evan is so despairing and lost, yet just trying to get through each day that you just want to cuddle him close. Lee's own grief over his wife's death is just under the surface, but his determination to protect his son shines through even when he is mysterious and almost fae-like. And of course, Jason is very cute and sweet and needy.

Really, they are all needy, and obviously need each other. You can almost picture the hole each of them fill for one another. Each grieving, but slowly getting ready to be in each other's lives.

The setting is probably familiar with people who have been to Denver, but as one who hasn't it left me a little lost. Not quite enough description made it hard for me to picture the story.

It was interesting seeing how public opinions can affect lives, and how rumors can twist the facts into something unrecognizable. But also, how sometimes it seems everyone is against you, but there may be supporters you never noticed.

Overall, the story was very interesting and attention-keeping. It was shorter than I would have liked, but it also felt shorter because so much was packed into the pages. I'm hoping at some point the author will come out with another story in the same world as it was definitely worthy of it. I kinda want to already read it again and see things in a different light after the big secret reveal.

No hugely overt problems with editing, which is a relief after another book I recently read.

This is a very slow burn, not spicy at all book. Its primary focus is the world and characters and action, not sex. The two MCs are great together. Evan's obliviousness is very adorable when it's obvious Lee has set his sights on him. And Lee's determination and need bleed through every aspect even when he is being mysterious. 

A wonderful, well-thought out dystopian world; fantasy creatures; sweet, yet grieving characters; and a man determined to protect his family at all costs. Luckless is definitely worth a read.

Edit: And there are two sequels now! Click here to check them out!

Luckless

The Luckless Series Book 1

by Cari Z

Dauntless

The Luckless Series Book 2

by Cari Z

Reckless

The Luckless Series Book 3

by Cari Z

Review : By Fairy Means or Foul by Meghan Maslow

Twig Starfig had no clue the unicorn was trouble the moment he walked into his office. Of course, it would be hard to notice trouble at that moment as he was busy forgetting his name and nearly drooling, completely overpowered by lust for the hottest guy he had ever seen. So much that he barely noticed the indentured servant who came into the office with him. Not a great way to show off detective skills.

Once Brandsome Nightwind, the unicorn, dials back on the unicorn lust magic though, Twig definitely starts noticing the cute human with him, and Twig's dragon half takes notice too.

While the unicorn tears up and tells his tale of woe, Twig finds himself constantly glancing at the other man who is rolling his eyes and just generally sassing behind his back. Apparently even being an indentured servant can't keep Quinn's sass levels low. And he doesn't seem to care for his master much.

The case is finally revealed by the distraught and stunning unicorn, Twig must find and get back the unicorn's horn.

As part dragon, Twig is able to magically sense where things are, so the case shouldn't be too hard. Though there is a holdup already. Brandsome doesn't have enough money for a deposit. Though he can temporarily sign over his indentured servant who will do anything Twig wants. Anything. Twig is not remotely interested in owning a sex slave, but before he can say no, he thinks about how Brandsome might just sign Quinn over to someone else to get the money. Unwilling to have that happen, he agrees to take Quinn as a surety.

As a half-breed, generally disdained by both fairies and dragons, Twig is a loner. He doesn't want or need anyone and has no intentions of keeping anyone around, but as he's forced to be around the human more and more, he finds himself falling for him. And his dragon doesn't help, he seems to have decided the human is his mate. Mate, not food, because his dragon half wasn't already weird enough.

Soon, the half-fairy, half-dragon who can't shapeshift, and the indentured servant who should be a wizard, but doesn't have access to magic, are falling for each other, but Brandsome still owns Quinn, and when they find the unicorn's horn, Quinn will have to go back to his owner. That is, if they survive trying to find the unicorn's horn.

I really enjoyed all three of these books and hope there will be more in the Starfig Investigations series. The world-building is top-notch, encompassing multiple realms and types of beings, each with their own uniqueness. 

A high fantasy romance detective novel shouldn't work, but it totally does. A fantasyland detective is as fun as a space western. It's as though the familiar set in the unfamiliar makes all the common tropes new again and fun.

The first two books in the series are solely from Twig's POV, while the third book is from Quinn's. While I miss seeing things from another point of view, it is better for the mystery to not switch between characters in each book as so many do today.

Twig Starfig tries to be the big, bad dragon detective, but while he is coarse and pretends to be gruff, he's really a marshmallow inside. He's bigger than most people because of his dragon blood, and he's just a bit bulky. He has midnight blue hair to his shoulders and black fingernails he can extend into claws. He can also shift his teeth, but is unable to shift his entire body into dragon form.

Quinn Broomsparkle is the first male witch wizard in 1000 years...well, he was supposed to be. Instead he was taken away from his family and taught magic for years, awaiting the day he came into his majority and could bond with a familiar to access his powers, only to find on that day that he couldn't seem to bond with any of the familiars at all. Sold into indentured servitude to pay back his schooling, Quinn is stuck with a narcissistic, mean-spirited unicorn who likes to gamble, cheat, and pass around Quinn at sex parties. This is not where Quinn saw his life going.

"Go ahead and say it. I can tell you’re dying to tell me something,” I said when he began chewing on his bottom lip. My dragon practically purred. What was that about? And what was with the urge to lean over and pull his abused flesh from his teeth? Must be the lingering effects of the unicorn’s magic. I was still so horny, my cock refusing to behave. My brain even now felt slow, but I could talk at least. Perdition, punishment, and perversions, that was some wicked magic. 

      “You’re awfully small for being dragon-born,” he blurted out, even though he was a good foot shorter than me. 

      Well that deflated my cock faster than a werebeaver with braces offering free blowjobs. My dragon wasn’t happy either if the grumbling in my head was any indication. 

      “And you’re awfully rude for a human,” I shot back. 

      He blushed. If I wasn’t so annoyed, I’d think it was adorable. But no.

The secondary characters are interesting as well. They each have very unique personalities and voices. It is very obvious when one or another is talking. They don't tend to reveal complex backstories, but they reveal enough to know they have them without hindering the storyline with unimportant details. Twig's father is an 8-inch tall fairy politician who wants Twig to run for office too. His dragon mother is slightly less terrifying and rules a clan in the dragon realm. There are also giants and ghosts, demons and and dragons, and numerous other creatures, including zombies.

Quinn is understandably intimidated by Twig at first. He's been used and abused for years and he doesn't trust Twig's altruism. But being afraid doesn't mean he's going to just roll over. He opens his mouth and talks back far too much for someone who knows he's likely to get his butt kicked for doing so. And when Twig doesn't punish him for it, he gets far more advanced in his snark.

“You know, dragons are known for their stamina,” I said to goad him a little. 

      “And selfishness,” he muttered under his breath, probably thinking I wouldn’t hear him. Little did he know, dragons had exceptional hearing.

The two are cute together. They play off of each other really well and have decent chemistry. The give and take between them reminds me a little of the snark chemistry between Flynn Ryder and Rapunzel, though the adult version.

There isn't a ton of sex in the book, but there are quite a few close encounters before they start. They want each other, but Twig is initially worried about inadvertently putting pressure on Quinn since he might not feel able to say no. Then, later, he is afraid of accidentally mating Quinn and since he don't want no relationship, his dragon will just have to suck it up, or suck it as the case may be.

The setting is really good. As they journey across the land we see the bad areas of the main fairy city, a huge desert, forests, and more. Each are unique and well-described, but not overly so so we aren't bombarded by details but can fill in our own images.

The pacing is good enough to keep one reading. Not too fast, not too slow. Just a steady stream of adventures, with a few high points throughout. I think the only slogging is in the desert.

Where By Fairy Means or Foul really shines is the tickle of the funny bone. It's sort of a better quality of Piers Anthony's Xanth style humor or along the lines of  Robert Asprin's MythAdventures. Less puns, but tidbits of silliness alternating with snark.

We continued through what had to be the center of the outpost, looking for a watering hole. It didn’t take us long. Another sign announced, “The Watering Hole and Inn.” 

“Creative folk.” I snorted, and then pushed through rickety swinging doors into a dimly lit saloon. An elderly cyclops barkeep shuffled down the counter toward us, setting down small pink doilies at each place along the way. Macramé hangings and weavings of cute Cerberus pups and adorable Pegasi foals littered every inch of wall space. Romance novels filled a large bookshelf near the bar. Not that I had a lot of time to look, but I did see a well-worn copy of Fifty Shades of Fae. 

“What’s with the grandma couture?” Quinn whispered from the side of his mouth.

The style of funny fantasy that doesn't take itself too seriously is my favorite part of the books. It's just genuinely entertaining. Though that doesn't mean there isn't character develop. Twig and Quinn both learn to trust each other and get past their issues quite a bit.

The editing is pretty good too. Few if any errors, and nothing overly wrong enough to disturb the story. Even the feel of the words was correct for the scenes.

Overall, By Fairy Means or Foul is fairly funny, even if a little foul. These two may be questing for a horn, but in fine fantasy style, a lot happens along the way, making the journey the destination. Twig and Quinn definitely deserve their HEA, even if it takes a form they could never have expected.

Oh, and the sequels are just as good! Most times, sequels lose the luster of the original and are just somehow lesser. But Be Fairy Game and His Fairy Share are both decent stories with new adventures and character developments. It is really worth reading all three. And hopefully the author will continue on.

 

Review: Warming Up To the Ice Dragon by Charlie Richards

Warming Up To the Ice Dragon by Charlie Richards
My rating: 3 of 5 stars

Warming Up To the Ice Dragon is an even shorter version of the standard Charlie Richards' romance.

On what was supposed to be a fun trip to go skiing with his friends, Stefan has an accident. Alone and frightened, he thinks he may die until he's rescued by a knight dragon in shining scales.

Kazeem has been looking for his mate for a long time, and to find him in such a way is surprising, but he has no time to ponder fate as he must hurry to ensure Stefan survives.

These two have some issues. Stefan knows nothing of paranormals. Kazeem isn't really good with humans. Will Stefan's suspicious friends make Stefan discount the mate-pull and run away?

I really like a lot of Charlie Richards' books, but they consistently have the same flaws. The actual story being rather abbreviated with an overwhelming amount of unnecessary sex scenes to flesh out the book, in addition to an abrupt ending. This novella had an even shorter story and more abrupt ending than most. Luckily for the reader, it also had other consistencies from this writer--good and interesting characters and interesting story lines that are otherwise well-written.

Stefan and his friends are a fun bunch of guys and it's easy to picture them together as buddies. Kazeem strikes a interesting contrast with his brusque and hermit-like nature. All the main characters are just right. Well-developed and complex enough to tell they have backstories.

The setting of this one was rather bland. I guess it was a rather typical ski area and typical hospital? It sometimes seems like the writer doesn't picture her settings at all as otherwise her very competent writing would do a better job of conveying them.




The story wasn't overly complex but it was plenty for such a short tale. A really interesting take on the getting hurt while skiing bit. And it was a bit surprising at times.

The ending was like many of this writer's books, a sudden stop that didn't have enough information to leave you feeling finished. It almost felt like there were missing pages as this was even more of an abrupt ending than most of them. I tend to like books that set it up so we can tell that everything has been solved, there are no loose threads, and the couple is going to have their HEA. I didn't quite get that satiated feeling with this one.



Sometimes I get the feeling that it's just that too many books are asked of this writer and that's why they seem to get shorter and shorter with so much sex-scene filler. It sucks because there's so much good writing in there and I love the varied characters (often including POC), and the variety of shifters and really interesting stories make me want to read more, while being a bit disappointed when each one never feels quite complete.

The recently released Spring Fever Anthology has a short story that gives one of Stefan's friends a mate. It too is just a tidbit of a story, but at least we get to see how Stefan and Kazeem are and get a bit more of them.

While this story is listed on both Amazon and GoodReads as part of the Wolves of Stone Ridge series, it shows no connection to it. As with several of the other series by this author such as Kontra's Menagerie, A Paranormal's Love, A Loving Nip, and now Shifter's Regime, I'm hoping the Wolves of Stone Ridge series makes a connection and the dragons show up there later.